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[Hector Cervantes]

Hey, apparently 40k has awoken my inner nerd:P and I'm working on a story for my character. But I need a name for the story.
So far I'm calling it Crimson Fury, but it doenst sound that great to me.

Anyone has any awesome suggestion they would like to share?


P.S. I'll submit the story to this site once its finished.

[Zero]

Why not just your forum name Cervantes?

[CruciasNZ]

Best to name a story with context to the story. What's the generalised storyarc?

[Hector Cervantes]

My character is a captain and his squad is sent to a barely populated agri world to stop a chaos cult from spreading. (That's the basic of the story)

[Zero]

My character is a captain and his squad is sent to a barely populated agri world to stop a chaos cult from spreading. (That's the basic of the story)

I really think Captain Cervantes sounds like a Space Marine kind of name.

[Hector Cervantes]

Not sure you'll have the patience to read it, already wrote two pages and the action is yet to begin

[CruciasNZ]

Not sure you'll have the patience to read it, already wrote two pages and the action is yet to begin

Hey, I had to sit through 4 hours of "breadth of knowledge" lectures in a row most days this year even though I'm heading into my last year of Uni. I think your book has a good chance of being entertaining

[Hector Cervantes]

lol, I'll take that as a compliment

[Hector Cervantes]

Heres a small excerpt:


The village is dominated by an enormous chapel, devoted to the cult of the emperor, surrounded by small houses and farms. The local governor is expecting us in the square just in front of the chapel’s main gates. No doubt he had been alerted to our arrival by our brothers aboard the strike cruiser.
Behind him, another figure appears coming from inside the chapel. A woman, dressed in black. Top hat and armored breastplate; an inquisitor, the inquisition badge hanging from her waist.
As we approached, the governor nervously walked toward us.
“M-my lords… Welcome! Would…would you like to come inside the chapel? This rain is most unnerving.”
“Don’t project your discomforts on me, governor. I’m an Astartes. The rain doesn’t bother me.”-I warn him.-“But let’s get inside. We have urgent matters to discuss.”
I turn my attention to the inquisitor, as we walk to the chapel.-“I wasn’t aware the inquisition had sent someone here too.”
“Ah, I’ve been investigating this case for the past two weeks. It was me who requested your presence, brother…?”
“Cervantes. Captain of the Crimson Fists second company.”
“My name is Anya. I hope we can work well together, Captain, in order to resolve this case.”
“Of course, the inquisition has always had my chapters support.”

[Domine Nox]

Based off your context but without knowing more...

Crimson Cleansing. Purging Fields. Light in Dark Places. Touchdown in Shadow. The Enemy Within. On the Fringe. The Emperor Protects.

If I knew more I might be able to come up with some better title ideas.

[Hector Cervantes]

Oh, thanks mate. I think Purging fields sounds good.

[Armoured Priest]

Hmmmm..... how about Bitch slapping heretics with the pimp hand? You because of crimson fist?

[Hector Cervantes]

Lol! I'll give it a thought, no promises though:P

[Zero]

Oh, I just reread that and just realized you wanted a name for your story and not your character. Yeah Purging Fields sounds pretty good.

[Armoured Priest]

Lol! I'll give it a thought, no promises though:P

Yeay! LOL:D!