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#1 Domine Nox

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Posted 26 February 2012 - 06:11 PM

An Ork head exploded before Fafnir as he laughed. More and more Orks charged his position, but Fafnir was not phased. All around him his wolf brothers were making quick work of the green horde.

"So when exactly does the difficulty start?" One Blood Claw voxed as his chainsword tore through Ork flesh, spraying gobbets of the xenos filth.

"Do not be over zealous, young one." Fafnir responded. "There are many more to slay before this victory will be ours." An ax blow bounced off his black armor. Swinging around quickly, the head of his crozious obliterated the attacking Ork, leaving the smell of burning flesh in its wake.

"Right, Brother Wolf Priest." The Blood Claw responded, sounding repentant. "Just trying to have a bit of fun."

"Fun?" Fafnir asked, sounding as though he would berate the pup. "The fun is in knowing you do the Emperor's work, and destroying his enemies before you." He roared. "Let us take the fight to them!" With that Fafnir charged out from his position, wolf cloak flowing behind him. Cresting the rim of the crater that they had holed up in to whether the Ork counter charge Fafnir could see the scene set out before him.

There was a Horde of the Greenskin menace, the air was thick with the black smoke of their crude machine as they covered the landscape. Amidst their myriad numbers Fafnir saw their objective, an orbital relay that the Orks had taken in a sudden and bold attack on the planet. His wolf brothers had come as soon as they had gotten the word, but the sheer Ork numbers had left nothing to save, only a world to be reclaimed. He glanced back at the five Blood Claws, and two Long Fangs that accompanied him, brave men. The main body of their force was attempting to draw the Orks the other direction while he led a small force to either clear the relay, or if it proved lost... destroy it.

"There," Fafnir pointed to a steep drop off from their vantage point. "We can scale down there and come around them."

"Grunveld and I will stay behind." Offered Hagar, one of the Long Fangs. "If we abandon this position the Orks might seek you out. We can hold their attention here."

"Sure it is not a cover for your aging bones?" Fafnir chided his friend, clapping him on the back. "You will do us proud." He motioned for the Blood Claws to follow him. As they reached the edge to begin the treacherous traverse to the ground Fafnir glanced back to see Grunveld hefting his Heavy Bolter, and Hagar checking over his Plasma Cannon.

"I shall be the first to the bottom." Jovan declared as he began to scale his way down.

"You have never been able to match me in climbing Jovan." Ulfgar responded.

"I will see both of you pitched to the bottom if you do not keep the vox chatter down." Fafnir growled. The remaining two hundred meters of descent down the rock face seemed to last forever as the woves moved slowly and stealthily downwards. When at last they had reached the ground Fafnir looked to check on the Ork's position. There was no new movement, no sign that their advance had been spotted. This put them along a small stream that was recessed from the surrounding landscape, perfect to approach the greenskins unseen.

"Wolf Brothers," Fafnir began. "We go into the heart of the enemy now. Though we go alone we are the fangs of the pack. We shall strike quickly, and we shall strike hard. The enemy shall not know we are coming, until we have ripped out their throat and laid our enemy low." There were nods all around as Fafnir spoke to them, knowing that they were going in against immeasurable odds, but that the relay had to fall.

"The warrior who acts our of honor cannot fail," The Wolf Priest continued. "His duty is honor itself. Even his death - if it is honorable - is a reward and can be no failure, for it has come through duty. Seek honor as you act and you will know the Emperor's protection." He intoned. He ended with a smile across his craggy face. "Now let the hunt begin." So saying the Space Wolves made their way along the stream bed, staying low. With their pelts and furs about their blue-grey armor it was as though a pack of wolves stalked the field.

When they had gotten close to the relay one Blood Claw poked his head just above the ridge line to survey, and quickly ducked again.

"Group of Orks, they do not seem to be alert. Thirty of them."

"Easy pickings." Fafnir said. "Jovan, watch right. Fregi, watch left. Ulgar, get that door open. Wylf and Bjorn, you are with me. Suffer not the xenos to live." So saying he leaped out of the recessed stream bed and landed in a sprint upon the ground. His powerful armored legs propelling him forward at great speed. Immediately he fired off a series of bolts from his bolt pistol, each round finding its mark in the soft unprotected flesh of Ork hide. Fountains of green viscera exploded from the surprised greenskins. The Blood Claws were right on his tail, their shots each precisely fired to pick out a target.

Ulfgar charged into the throng of Orks, smashing them aside as he ran through them barreling towards the door to the relay. Fafnir lost sight of him then, but trusted Ulgar would succeed. As Fafnir waded into the brutal xenos his crozius swung about him like the pendulum of fate, destroying anything that stood in its path.

"Door is open, Wolf Priest." Ulgar's voice called. Fafnir fired off a bolt round finishing off the last Ork that was charging towards Jovan.

"Inside, Blood Claws!" Fafnir shouted, covering their retreat to see if any attention had been drawn. The area was relatively empty, but he knew that would change all too quickly. Once inside he slammed the doors shut, and smashed the operating mechanism with his fist. The Orks would have to force their way in. The first floor to the relay was surprisingly empty, and Fafnir did not like the look of it.

"Jovan, sit rep." He called to the young Blood Claw.

"We have two ways up, Wolf Priest." Jovan responded dutifully. "Stairs and a turbo lift. Sensors pick up a great deal of movement on the upper levels."

"Two teams then. Ulgar, Jovan you are with me." Fafnir ordered. "Fregi, Wylf, Bjorn take the lift. You three take the lift to the top, we shall meet you there."


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#2 Gerhart

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 02:04 AM

Well done, some Hunters may be upset though ;).

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 02:41 AM

Nice job Nox, looking forward to part 2!

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 02:58 AM

Nice nox, now i can read this and the Hunters
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Posted 27 February 2012 - 04:27 AM

great work Nox, i WANT to read part 2, so you better finish writing soon :)

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 05:55 AM

Step by step Fafnir and the two Blood Claws made their ascent. At each level they proceeded the slow systematic purge of the greenskin menace. They were few and scattered, but the relay tower was a massive structure, and as conflicts increased so did the resistance of the Orks. The only reprieve came when the other teams lift reached the apex of the tower and the Orks were thrown into disorder, trying to split their forces up and down.

"Wolf Priest, if you do not move any faster this tower may be still as the grave when you get up here." Fregi voxed.

"As long as it is not your grave, then all is well." Fafnir replied as he kicked an Ork into a metal stanchion with a crunch before taking off its head with the crackling power of his crozius. "Set up a defensive position and hold. The Mekboy running this thing must be somewhere between us. We shall flush him out."

"Unless we get him first." Laughed Jovan. As he spoke there came a sickening crunch and the vox was then filled with a gargle. Fafnir turned to see Jovan flailing helplessly as he was lifted off of the ground, the tips of a massive metal claw protruding through his chest.

"No!" Fafnir roared charging amidst the sea of Orks between him and the the young Marine. The Ork that had skewered him laughed a raucous booming sound that ate at Fafnir's soul.

"Umies think you so smart." The Ork laughed. "So tough." He tossed Jovan aside and slammed his chest with his free hand. "Ork tough. Grimnak smarter than stupid 'umie." The speaking Ork was a tremendous brute, wires and gizmos all around him in his makeshift version of power armor. A pillar of black smoke pumped from his back.

"Your time on this planet is coming to an end Ork." Fafnir said trying to size up his opponent. He was large for an Astartes, bigger than many of his brothers, but this Ork was larger still, and not to be taken lightly. "The Emperor's might flows through me, and with it I shall meet out his righteous justice upon you."

"Stupid 'umie talk too much." The Ork roared, and charged, wildly swinging its power claw. Fafnir ducked under the blow and swung his crozius at the beast. It connected with a flash of blue energy against a forcefield. The Ork laughed in response as the claw came back across. Fafnir ducked aside but the claw clipped his armored shoulder causing him to stagger. The beast was strong.

Turning the stagger into a roll, Fafnir came up firing at the Ork, who simply laughed at him as the field flashed against each impact. Fafnir continued to fire and rushed back in towards the Ork. He just had to overload the field.

"Come git squashed spes marene." The Ork taunted. Fafnir fired until the bolt pistol clicked empty, then he tossed that at the Ork as well. The Ork swatted it aside, and that provided him with an opening. Swung several blows in quick succession, flashing with brilliant sparks against the invisible field.

"Wolf Priest." Ulfgar voxed.

"Ulfgar, grab Jovan and-" He was cut off as the power claw slammed into his side. "And get to the top level." Fafnir grabbed hold of the claw, and redirected his blows to the claw. Slamming the crozius down on the wrist joint of the crudely made Orkish claw.

"Ger'off!" The Ork roared trying to shake the Wolf Priest free. Fafnir jammed a grenade into the claw before letting go and slamming into a metal table. The blast was followed by a fizzle as the Ork's field overloaded, and then a clang as part of the claw slammed to the ground.

"Your time is over, Xenos filth." Fafnir declared, rising to his feet. He was caught by surprise when from the claw there suddenly came a jet of flame. He dove aside as the Ork laughed, spraying the fire wildly.

"I thought me time was up." The Ork goaded.

"It is." Fafnir promised rising to his feet. "I am a son of Russ. A Wolf of Fenris. I have strode the snows around the Aett, and climbed the peerless peaks of the Fang. I have smote enemies without number in the Emperor's name. You shall not be the death of me." As he spoke he held the crozius before him as the flame came at him, but then parted before him as his own field generated by his rosarius protected him. The Ork paused a moment in surprise, looking at his claw as though there were something wrong with it.

"The Emperor is my shield, and I shall not know weakness for he is by my side." So declaring Fafnir struck out with the crozius, slamming it into the Ork's power armor, forcing the Mekboy back as he swung his claw about to defend himself. Fafnir could not move to intercept the blow in time and the claw tore into his side, slicing open his armor. Grimacing over the pain he slammed the crozius down again on the claw, severing the mighty claw from the Ork's limb. The beast roared in protest, staggering away.

Ignoring the pain in his side Fafnir leaped up after the Ork, landing upon his chest. Fafnir drove his thumb into the greenskins eye to grab hold of its head. With the other hand he drove the crozius like a blade into the monster's head. With a crackle of power the Ork's skull blew apart, causing it to fall to the ground, Fafnir atop it.

"Ulfgar, how is Jovan?" Fafnir asked as he rose from the steaming corpse of the Ork Mekboy.

"Not well, Wolf Priest. I fear he may be short for this world."

With the death of the Mekboy, the Space Wolves found little further resistance in the orbital relay. Word came in that the rest of the Wolves were turning the Waagh into a rout once the relay had gone down and limited their ability to transmit coordinates to their forces spread about the planet. Fafnir tried all he could to save Jovan, but the damage was too extensive. It was with great sorrow and great reverence that Fafnir took from Jovan his genetic code that his legacy would continue in some other brave soul chosen to join their vaunted ranks.

"Wolf Priest." Fregi said coming to Fafnir as he finished up his ministrations upon Jovan. "Wolf Lord Harald Deathwolf wishes to have a word with you." Fafnir nodded, taking in the information, as he rose from the now deceased body of a former brother. Making his way down the tower, and outside he was greeted by the sight of Predetor tanks and rows of marines in the livery of the Space Wolves. Amidst them Wolf Lord Harald Deathwolf, he was patting the flanks of a massive Thunderwolf; Icetooth.

"Wolf Lord, you summoned me." Fafnir said, slamming his fist across his chest.

"Yes, Fafnir. I wanted to congratulate you on taking the tower in a timely manner. Though that is not the only reason I wished to speak with you." His voice was a crisp cold tone, like a wind through the mountains.

"Speak plainly, Lord." Fafnir said. "I would wish to see young Jovan's body is attributed all the proper rights."

"That will not be possible, Fafnir." Harald said. "Some other Wolf Priest will attend to Jovan's remains, he will be missed at the feast tonight. I have been asked to lend one of our number to the aid of the Deathwatch, and you are my candidate. You will show them the might of the Wolves, and honor our Chapter."

"As you command, Wolf Lord." Fafnir acquiesced as he saluted again and said a prayer in his head to the lost brother. Fafnir could not help but wonder what he might face amidst the Deathwatch, and hoped that those he would meet there might be half as brave as those that fought and died here.

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 02:54 PM

Very nice addition Nox!




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