Hey, I just thought I'd let you all read this if wanted to. I'd like some feedback, where I can make improvements, etc. Here ya go.
http://www.fanfictio...00/1/Iron_Guard
My Fanfic
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, Aug 09 2012 03:07 PM
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Posted 09 August 2012 - 03:07 PM
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Posted 09 August 2012 - 05:14 PM
I'll have a read through it when I get the chance.
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Posted 10 August 2012 - 02:14 PM
I just had read of it, not bad, but did you have to end with the Terminator meme 
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Posted 11 August 2012 - 02:41 AM
I just had read of it, not bad, but did you have to end with the Terminator meme
Yeah. Imperial Fists are the stoic badasses, like a T-800. Du du du du du!
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Posted 12 August 2012 - 08:56 PM
Good Brother. Hope to see more.
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