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[Angry Comedian]

The sun has set on a hive planet controlled by the imperium of man, but even after the sun has sunk under the planets horizon a fiery glow still burns bright over the main capital city for even before the sun had even began to rise the city had been savaged by a small but deadly force of khorne berzerkers killing any and all in their path , and as the day went on body's pilling up in the streets by the hundreds,fires burning higher making their way to the top of the tallest buildings .

A city consumed by fire And chaos leaving no one alive and as the fires burned the dead and dying the berzerkers being lead by galroth the demolisher waged a siege of unrelenting death and destruction upon the hive world destroying one city after the next, all of them being left in ruins.monuments of the god Emporer being torn down by chaos followers and traitor guardsmen but there was no looting in the cities only blood and fire cascading over the cities massive structures which darkened the sky causing ash to rain down upon the burning wastes of a once thriving metropolis.

Galroth who even after slaughtering thousands of civilians and loyalist guardsmen was still not fulfilled with this payment of blood and horror to khorne and as the population quickly disintegrated into a massive pile of ash and crushed bone he began to realize that his blood frenzy may not last very much longer and would have to resort to drastic measures. For as long as there are skulls to be claimed for khorne And worshippers of the false emporer to be slain, he will never be satisfied for he is an instrument of khorne's will and he will massacre hundreds more of these hive worlds until he either dies or is commanded by khorne otherwise .

His tribute to khorne has just begun and after the ravaged remains are picked clean of any survivors galroth still filled with a endless rage turns on his own berserker horde and adds their corpses to the near endless piles of the mangled,decapitated and charred remains of citizens and guardsmen that they came to relinquish from this galaxy. His eyes burning with an intense hatred turning to the crowd of traitor guardsmen and chaos followers who just witnessing this supposed betrayal were then themselves harvested and ravaged by galroth as just another offering to khorne. For the warp had corrupted so far deep into his mind that at times In battle he would slaughter both the enemy and his allied chaos legionaries before leaving only himself standing tall , drenched in the blood of both imperialist and chaos .

The warp Had altered his mind and body beyond any human comprehension, the skin on his face was removed which he did to himself . Then carved symbols of the blood god into the tissue and muscles of his butchered face ,then slashing at his wrists as if to release any mortal weakness from his veins ,drapping a crued necklace of small children's skulls dangling on a line made from human intestines all which he did as a sign to khorne that he was more then capable of serving the blood god and adding greatly to his skull throne. Galroth remained on the charred hive world as if to wait for the next unsuspecting victims to arrive to this burning wasteland of a planet. With the sky blanketed in a sea of fire and black smoke he returns to the ruined city that is slowly crumbling all around him, sifting thru fiery tom like buildings that remain standing, ever vigilantly searching in the rubble and dark passage ways that have been missed by the
Chaos siege , still he shall hunt for the living and for more trophies to present his master's insatiable hunger .

[destroyerOFwill]

Nice story bro!! Awesome as always

[Sammael]

Good stuff!

[Brother White]

Very nice, I see the fists are writing for chaos now, you should check out my thread, for the love of it...

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[JC 042]

Khan The Betrayers younger cousin?

[Brother White]

It's Kharne!

Sent from the Melta practice chambers of the Righteous Truth

[JC 042]

It's Kharne!

Sent from the Melta practice chambers of the Righteous Truth

Khan The Betrayer, Great Guy!

(first person to give me a quote to prove you know this meme gets a rep point)

Also great story dood.

[Siddicus]

Nice story mate.

Kharn on warp dust.

[Angry Comedian]

KHAAAAAAAAAN.... Last noted entry from the u.s.s enterprise

[Armoured Priest]

It's Kharne!

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Khan The Betrayer, Great Guy!

(first person to give me a quote to prove you know this meme gets a rep point)

Also great story dood.

Spoiler

Khârn the Betrayer, as I've often told skeptics from other legions, is a hell of a guy. His mighty axe isn't his greatest weapon; it's his charm.Take the battle of Camrae III. We hadn't expected the loyalist legions there to last for more than a week, but the thrice-damned Imperium had managed to sneak a massive Warlord Titan onto the planet without our knowledge. (They'd literally buried it under a mountain.) We'd been trying to kill the thing for a solid month, but wherever the war machine tromped, the legions of Chaos died.That was, until Tuesday.On Tuesday, we'd been chasing a legion of weakened Astartes down a long, winding canyon to slaughter them in the name of Khorne, when we heard the war-horn of the Titan braying its triumph as it emerged around a bend in the rocky passage. Our blood turned to water and our knees turned to jelly as we realized that we were trapped in the canyon we had sought to turn to our advantage, about to be undone by the gargantuan deathbringer. The loyalist Astartes hooted at us as the house-sized cannons began to glow with the fire of a thousand suns, warming up our demise, and we gritted our teeth in anticipation of the end.Then, we saw Khârn.He was running along the edge of the sheer sides of the rocky canyon, full-tilt, his armor-clad boots kicking rocks, dirt, and occasionally small animals over the cliff face as he sprinted. With both loyalist and chaos marine alike looking on in awe, he coiled his legs beneath him, crushing a couple of deep footprints into the solid rock at the cliff edge, and launched himself into the air. For a brief moment, time stood still as he sailed over the heads of the combatants below, his arms gracefully extended like a swan's wings, if that swan had been fathered by a Chaos god and granted an insatiable lust for blood.With a clang, he landed on the bridge of the Titan, the void shields swirling uselessly around him. He drew back one superhuman fist and punched a giant goddamned hole in the armor of the machine with a sound like two Thunderhawks colliding in midair. His monstrous hands grappled the torn adamantium and as the metal shuddered under the force of his sheer rage he paused as he cast his gaze into the hole he had created."TEN POINTS," bellowed Khârn as he continued to peel the titan's armor back like a car door. Raw sunlight was cast into the titan's cockpit for the first time in millennia, and the crew turned to face their aggressor. The princeps had just removed himself from the machine but had barely any time to react and only yelped in terror as Khârn ripped him from his control seat and tossed him out into the open air. The red dot that was Khârn scrambled inside and we, at that point, could only figure that he was giving himself a crash course with learning how to pilot the damned thing.Every warrior froze as the titan seized up and began jerking about, when from over the sound systems Styx's "Mr. Roboto" began blasting out over the battlefield as the titan itself began rampaging across the canyon floor. The fighting resumed as quickly as it had halted, the loyalists fighting in a last ditch effort to flee from being caught underfoot of the former Imperial controlled titan. The men of the Red Rivers could barely aim their lasguns proper as we all roared with laughter through the whole ordeal. Even still, as the battle drew to a close, we finally lost it and gripped our sides in laughter as the titan finally collapsed onto its back and went critical after Khârn cleared the scene. As he came back up to us I raised my arm for a high five, which he gladly obliged and broke every bone in my hand.As he looked back over the smoking husk and ruined corpses strewn about the canyon I asked him what caused him to lose his balance, and he looked down at me and said, "I WAS TRYING TO GET IT TO BREAK DANCE BUT IT HAD NO SOUL."

So do I win?

[Siddicus]

LMFAO! That is classic lol! Kharn is my hero.

[JC 042]

You win Priest