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#1 Brother White

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Posted 29 August 2012 - 12:25 AM

Anderus lay their still his body broken, pain rushing through him his aromor was ripped open, on leg was gone do to a melta gun. All of this pain and yet he smiled licking his chapped burnt lips. He gave into the pain, a voice in his head spoke.
You're enjoying this, yes
"Yes!" he cried out.
Good, would you like more?
"Yes please, show me how" Anderus raised his arm, which was already cut open from the battle that saw his whole company destroyed, with knife in hand he pushed it into his severed leg, ever so slowly. The pain was gutwrenching but exilerating.
Yes, I can give you this and more
Anderus stopped and thought for a moment as he lay their broken "How, I am beyond repair?"
All you have to do is say yes, let me repair you
"Yes" he said "Fix me, I want to feel more of these sensations" he proclaimed.
His mind ripped at him like monster trying to get free of its chains, he screamed horrific screams, blood flowed from his eyes, he thought the pain would never stop, secretly he didn't want it to. Then in a flash it was gone.
Anderus stood up, his wounds healed his armor repaired, a sickly serated knife in his hand, he no longer wore the aquiala of the Emporer an new symbol had taken its place. He cared not how alive he felt was all that mattered now.
The sents off the battle hit him in an instant rotted flesh burnt inards filled the air. The smell exilerated him, so he began mutualating the bodies of his once brothers, cutting flesh from bones and attaching them to the new spikes of his armor.
Then he him, his Captain laid dead and a crooked smile came across Anderus's face. He began cutting the Captains face from his skull first beheading him carving the skull out. He cut the sides of the boneless face and licked the goo flowing from it, then Anderus put the dead mans face over his own and wore it as a mask. He cut out the mouth so his could fit through, stabing himself a bit just to feel the pain. Anderus let out a howl, the a manical laugh.
You are my champion now, no longer are you Anderus, but The Faceless One
said the voice.
"I am!" he yelled "I will wear many for you my lord Slanessh!" Then he marched on a Champion of pleasure...
Yes I like that, my champion of pleasure...

#2 Corman2030

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Posted 29 August 2012 - 12:28 AM

Disturbing and awesome! Well done.

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#3 Brother White

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Posted 29 August 2012 - 12:34 AM

Yeh getting my slanessh out of my system

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#4 Sammael

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Posted 29 August 2012 - 01:16 AM

Very nice. Well, not nice, pretty sick, but very well done. :)
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Posted 29 August 2012 - 01:18 AM

Thanks man, give ya a little taste of slanessh

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Posted 29 August 2012 - 09:30 PM

Nice, well done. Not what I expected, but very awesome.

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 12:24 AM

Anderus marched on, for days he moved through the rotting corpses till he came upon a city, with wonderful sounds and smells coming from it. He smiled the ragged rotting flesh of his once Captain still a mask on his face. His heart started to race, blood pumping through his vains keeping pace with the music.
The Champion came into the city, the first of many smells was that of sweat then cooked meat, the flavors in the air swirled around in colorful lights he watched them move through the air it enveloped him, he loved it. He grabbed food off of the closest table, the man behind the table said nothing only watching in awe of this great figure before him.
Anderus tasted the meat it was tuff but sweet "What is this?" He asked chomping down for another bite. "It is you..." the man said. Anderus looked at the man, anger growing inside him. The man noticed "Well one like you my lord.." he explained, unfortunatly for him all this did was make Anderus furious "You are eating my kinsmen sacred flesh! How dare you!" In one swift movement he grabed the man by the head and smashed his face into the open flame of the grill. The man screamed, Anderus's flesh on his hand began to burn and boil, it felt good he loved the pain, the scream died down just as the man did. Anderus released the lifeless head, and the wieght of the body draged it to the ground.
The Champion contuined through the crowded city streets, the sound of music pushing him through the crowd faster, driving him, he began smashing and stomping to the tribal like beat. Swinging his hands in the air clubbing the crowd around him screams let out, the smell of blood cut through the air, he killed and mutalated anything in his path, Anderus murdered his way towards the music.
When he arrived covered in blood, a couple fresh scars where others had tried to fight back, he stood in fron of this 'band' he smiled 'What a loose term' he thought. His blood rushed hearing the sounds so close now, groups of people behind him were down on the ground in a massive orgy, moans of pleasure were heard all around.
Yes go to them, give in to the pleasure...
Anderus turned and walked to them he came to a man thrusting into a woman, her face was pure pleasure. Anderus wanted that, looking at the man he slowly draged his blade into the mans back slowly he drove it deeper, then then pulled it out, he licked up the fresh blood, the man fell over on top of the woman heavy breathing and blood running everywhere. Anderus was upset and grabed the man around the chest and forced him back up and manually made him thrust.
This pleases her...
Anderus then with his free hand drove his knife into the mans neck blood spat out on the woman and the crowd, she smeared it all over her body and let out a joyus cry. He then finished beheading the man and through the head into the orgy, still thrusting the limp body he removed the mask of his Captains face, she climaxed at Anderus's beautiful face his jaw line perfect and cut not a flaw any where to be found, he let go of the body letting it fall the ground. Then placed the mask over the womans head, then the music rose and in a flash Anderus smashed his fist through the womans face turning it to mush.
Kill them all my champion!... raged the voice.
Andeus laughed and began his slaughter, smelling the blood and bodily fluids in the air he roared with apperciation to the musicians, and music grew louder and faster, and Anderus went to work for his master...

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 02:55 AM

Wonderfully warp tainted. Has the Wolf Lord started to show signs of corruption
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Posted 30 August 2012 - 03:09 PM

Well done bro.

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 06:30 PM

Awesome story, u make slaanesh tingle in his underwear with such joy .
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