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[Kite Arca]

Now like the other story this is a quick draft I'll have the final copy in a bit.





Normal days.... About sums up my life he thought sitting in his car as he waited for the light to change. It just another old day I always seem to get stopped by this light "sigh" reaching up to scratch his buzzed head he closed his eye and remembered the events of this morning.
  "Kite? Kite? KITE! Are you listing to me?" waking up with a big yawn he rolled over to see a girl next to him she had black hair that stretched down to her shoulders and bright green eyes her skin almost snow white "Morning Ruby." placing her hand on his forehead the look in her eyes like something had happened.
 "Is everything okay?" questioning her "You seemed different last night." " oh did I? Maybe I have evil twin!" he said with a big grin. "That's not funny!" as she smacked his head.
 Zoning back into reality he was still sitting at the light. Opening his eye something odd caught  his  attention the lights on the traffic lights were different one black and one red. The man closed his eyes to rub them thinking he was tired but nothing changed staring at the lights both lights started to changed again this time taking on half of a pure red and black face both with one eye and a Half grin. Was kite losing it? HOOOOOOONK the sound of a cars horn going off from behind him the light was green shaking his head kite stepped on the gas peddle. What was that he thought to himself.

[TheGodDernMan]

WOW! The depth, the wisdom. This is truly a master piece! ;-)

[Optic20]

i might suggest word - to proof read...
all in all its a very interesting story.

[Kite Arca]

as i said... its a rough draft i did on a iphone... and its not done.

[Optic20]

as i said... its a rough draft i did on a iphone... and its not done.

just giving you a hard time,
nice work.

[Cypher 1013]

Very nicely done.

[Kite Arca]

Heres Part one



“Normal...is the word that just about sums up my life”, I thought as I sat in his car, waiting for this godforsaken red light in front of me to change. No matter what I try, I always seem to get stopped by this damn light. I sighed loudly, reaching my hand up to scratch my low cut scalp. I was beginning to doze a bit, so I closed my eyes, hoping perhaps by the time I open them, the light will have changed....but then I began to remember the event of this morning.



“Kite...?” I heard in what seemed like a the distant dark abyss of my subconscious. “Kite...? KITE!!! Are you even listening to me?!” The voice cried louder. It was a familiar sound, which beckoned me to open my eyes. Waking up, my body stirs and stretches as I yawn. That familiar voice had brought a familiar face before me, a young lady I'd been friends with, named Ruby. I gaze at her with tired eyes,

“Morning to you too, Ruby.” I said, placing my hand onto her forehead. But the look in her eyes seemed as if something were wrong. This brought me to full attention.

“Is everything okay?” I asked.

“You....last night, Kite, you seemed....different.” She spoke. Curious to know what she was talking about, I jokingly responded.

“Oh? Well I didn't feel any different last night...well, outside of my usual strange behavior.” I chuckled. But she was serious. Responding with a smack to the back of my head,

“That's not funny, Kite.” She scolded. “I'm being serious here.”

I caught myself dozing off completely, snapping back into reality. I began to wonder what she meant by this exactly. Just then, I noticed something amiss. The lights...they'd somehow looked as if they'd' begun to bend and twist. I rubbed my eyes to make sure I'd not gone insane, but they'd definitely changed! The red in the top had been morphed into two colors...the second to which I'd only seen when it was inactive. It was a healthy shade of red and oblivion black. Glancing at the other lights in the crossroad, I noticed that they'd all done the same. Have I gone mad? Or was I still day dreaming...? Suddenly there's a rather loud 'Honk' that blasted from behind me. I could see in my rear view mirror, a compatriot had been anxiously awaiting my departure....for the lights had changed to green. I quickly slam my feet onto the accelerator, making a hasty escape to the situation.

“What the hell is going on....?” I muttered, questioning the very reality I was driving through. As I rode on, I began to see the colors again, they were everywhere! Except, something else was happening inside them. Things...what look like faces started appearing inside the red and black, and they were grinning at me, watching as I passed. I did my best to hurry to work without catching the attention of the police.



Walking swiftly into my office building I went straight to the bathroom, hoping I could maybe get some water to cool my head off. The running water inside was nice and cold as I stood before the sinks, dousing my head within. Whipping it out, I wiped my face....only to be startled by another of those faces, resting before me. It smiled a devious smile, as if it were about to do something sinister. Frozen in place, all I could do was stare back at it's twisted expression.

“....Hello, Jack....” It suddenly spoke, in an echoed tone that startled me. “We've missed you.” Hesitant to speak, I force words,

“Wh-who are you....and whaddya want with me...!?” I questioned. “What are you....and wh-who is this 'Jack' you speak of...?” Its response was nothing short of creepy. Laughing a most maniacal laugh, it glared at me.

“Why you're Jack. Jack Kite to be exact.” It says. Jack Kite, I've never even heard of the guy. I mean, my name is Kite, but I've never in my life gone by the name Jack before... Perplexed by its response, I could not respond aloud...but as I try to put the pieces together in my head, more of them begin to appear on the other mirrors in the bathroom.

“It's not about what, Jack.” The others began to speak. “It's more about 'WHO', my friend.”

“I-I'm no friend of yours!” I blindly shouted back. “I don't even know you, leave me alone!” Just then they all became silent.....followed by more laughter. The room felt like it began to spin as I could hear their laughter surrounding me. I shut my eyes and began to scream, holding my head in fear and fell to my knees.

“We will see you soon enough, Jaaaaackie boy.” It spoke as things became quiet. I opened my eyes to see things had gone back to normal, but I was still shaken up pretty badly. Dragging myself off the floor, I left that bathroom and went to my desk. I could hear my coworkers chatting just down the way about something as I sit, shivering.

“Kite, are you alright?” A voice asked, startling the bajesus out of me. I turned to see my boss behind me with his arms crossed. But something was amiss again. Looking up to his face, I noticed it was gone! And not like in a 'he's just missing his eyes' gone, I mean his entire face was missing!! Aside from this, it seemed like everything had gone black and white on me simply by blinking. I didn't know what to say to him.

“You look upset, Kite.” his facelessness continued. “Is everything okay? A few people said they saw you storm in, straight to the bathroom without even clocking in.” I closed my eyes and tried to snap out of it...keep a straight face, you know.

“Uhh....I'm sorry, sir. I'm just a little tired is all.” I muttered. But as I opened my eyes again...

“JAAAAAAAACK, you want to see what happens next?!” The voice loudly speaks. “WE SHALL CONSUME EVERYTHING!!!” My boss's head suddenly exploded, splashing blood all over my body. Followed by this, the rest of his body began to destroy itself, spilling more blood across the entire office. It's like something out of a horror film, except ten times worse and random. I lost myself in that moment, screaming out of control like a maniac, I tried to flee the situation.



End Part 1

[Gerhart]

Well done, keep it up.

[Kite Arca]

Part 1


“Normal...is the word that just about sums up my life”, I thought as I sat in his car, waiting for this godforsaken red light in front of me to change. No matter what I try, I always seem to get stopped by this damn light. I sighed loudly, reaching my hand up to scratch my low cut scalp. I was beginning to doze a bit, so I closed my eyes, hoping perhaps by the time I open them, the light will have changed....but then I began to remember the event of this morning.



“Kite...?” I heard in what seemed like a the distant dark abyss of my subconscious. “Kite...? KITE!!! Are you even listening to me?!” The voice cried louder. It was a familiar sound, which beckoned me to open my eyes. Waking up, my body stirs and stretches as I yawn. That familiar voice had brought a familiar face before me, a young lady I'd been friends with, named Ruby. I gaze at her with tired eyes,

“Morning to you too, Ruby.” I said, placing my hand onto her forehead. But the look in her eyes seemed as if something were wrong. This brought me to full attention.

“Is everything okay?” I asked.

“You....last night, Kite, you seemed....different.” She spoke. Curious to know what she was talking about, I jokingly responded.

“Oh? Well I didn't feel any different last night...well, outside of my usual strange behavior.” I chuckled. But she was serious. Responding with a smack to the back of my head,

“That's not funny, Kite.” She scolded. “I'm being serious here.”

I caught myself dozing off completely, snapping back into reality. I began to wonder what she meant by this exactly. Just then, I noticed something amiss. The lights...they'd somehow looked as if they'd' begun to bend and twist. I rubbed my eyes to make sure I'd not gone insane, but they'd definitely changed! The red in the top had been morphed into two colors...the second to which I'd only seen when it was inactive. It was a healthy shade of red and oblivion black. Glancing at the other lights in the crossroad, I noticed that they'd all done the same. Have I gone mad? Or was I still day dreaming...? Suddenly there's a rather loud 'Honk' that blasted from behind me. I could see in my rear view mirror, a compatriot had been anxiously awaiting my departure....for the lights had changed to green. I quickly slam my feet onto the accelerator, making a hasty escape to the situation.

“What the hell is going on....?” I muttered, questioning the very reality I was driving through. As I rode on, I began to see the colors again, they were everywhere! Except, something else was happening inside them. Things...what look like faces started appearing inside the red and black, and they were grinning at me, watching as I passed. I did my best to hurry to work without catching the attention of the police.



Walking swiftly into my office building I went straight to the bathroom, hoping I could maybe get some water to cool my head off. The running water inside was nice and cold as I stood before the sinks, dousing my head within. Whipping it out, I wiped my face....only to be startled by another of those faces, resting before me. It smiled a devious smile, as if it were about to do something sinister. Frozen in place, all I could do was stare back at it's twisted expression.

“....Hello, Jack....” It suddenly spoke, in an echoed tone that startled me. “We've missed you.” Hesitant to speak, I force words,

“Wh-who are you....and whaddya want with me...!?” I questioned. “What are you....and wh-who is this 'Jack' you speak of...?” Its response was nothing short of creepy. Laughing a most maniacal laugh, it glared at me.

“Why you're Jack. Jack Kite to be exact.” It says. Jack Kite, I've never even heard of the guy. I mean, my name is Kite, but I've never in my life gone by the name Jack before... Perplexed by its response, I could not respond aloud...but as I try to put the pieces together in my head, more of them begin to appear on the other mirrors in the bathroom.

“It's not about what, Jack.” The others began to speak. “It's more about 'WHO', my friend.”

“I-I'm no friend of yours!” I blindly shouted back. “I don't even know you, leave me alone!” Just then they all became silent.....followed by more laughter. The room felt like it began to spin as I could hear their laughter surrounding me. I shut my eyes and began to scream, holding my head in fear and fell to my knees.

“We will see you soon enough, Jaaaaackie boy.” It spoke as things became quiet. I opened my eyes to see things had gone back to normal, but I was still shaken up pretty badly. Dragging myself off the floor, I left that bathroom and went to my desk. I could hear my coworkers chatting just down the way about something as I sit, shivering.

“Kite, are you alright?” A voice asked, startling the bajesus out of me. I turned to see my boss behind me with his arms crossed. But something was amiss again. Looking up to his face, I noticed it was gone! And not like in a 'he's just missing his eyes' gone, I mean his entire face was missing!! Aside from this, it seemed like everything had gone black and white on me simply by blinking. I didn't know what to say to him.

“You look upset, Kite.” his facelessness continued. “Is everything okay? A few people said they saw you storm in, straight to the bathroom without even clocking in.” I closed my eyes and tried to snap out of it...keep a straight face, you know.

“Uhh....I'm sorry, sir. I'm just a little tired is all.” I muttered. But as I opened my eyes again...

“JAAAAAAAACK, you want to see what happens next?!” The voice loudly speaks. “WE SHALL CONSUME EVERYTHING!!!” My boss's head suddenly exploded, splashing blood all over my body. Followed by this, the rest of his body began to destroy itself, spilling more blood across the entire office. It's like something out of a horror film, except ten times worse and random. I lost myself in that moment, screaming out of control like a maniac, I tried to flee the situation.



End Part 1

Part 2 “lies”

“What the hell what the hell!?” Those are the words I muttered; running as fast as I could and as far my feet could take me. I needed to get to someplace safe…. Someplace far. The sound of emergency vehicles sirens in the distance were going off... slowing my sprint to a walk, I needed to catch my breath, so I found a wall to lean up against. Lucky for me it was an ally in the old part of town no one goes into anymore. There's been so much crazy shit going on… My boss just exploding like that, those faces… that voice… Just thinking about it, some words came back to me….
“You....last night, Kite, you seemed....different.” Those words, they just kept repeating in my head.
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” That voice again…. That horrifying voice was back “Do you really think you can run away from us?”

“WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?! WHAT DO YOU WANT!?” I screamed at the top of my lung. “Now, now, there’s no need for yelling, my friend.” …this voice was different. It seemed clammier and somewhat gentle…
“Who are you…?” I asked
“Would you kindly hold that piece of broken glass up and look into it?” Near my feet was a broken chunk of glass lying near my feet, but how did he know that…? It seemed like forever leaning over to grab that it, but when I finally did, I'd held it up and the face appeared again. As I suspected, this one was red and was mirrored to the black face the half grin and the one eye.
“Ahh there you are, Kite; my friend. So good to see you.”
“I don’t even know you…. Who...or what are you?”
“Well you may call me Red Joker.” The face did a nodding motion “And we are us.”
“We? Us? I don't understand.”
“YES WE ARE US! NOW LETS US SHOW YOU!” The murderous voice suddenly came back and the red face was gone only to give way to the black one. “Come into to our world, little KITE!” Just as he said that I felt something pulling at me. I felt dizzy... everything went black.

It's cold… I felt like I couldn't breathe and my eyes wouldn't open. I rolled around and tried to feel around to see if I was in the ally but I was not… I could feel dirt and what seemed to be rocks, but there was no concrete or anything… I kept trying to open my eyes it seemed like hours passed. Finally I was able to open them and what I saw left me shocked speechless. I was in a completely different place. As a matter of fact, it seemed like I was an entirely different world… everything was gray and black… the sky black the ground gray… There was no grass, no clouds, no sun, and no moon… it seemed like every time I tried to take a breath it would just get sucked out of me.
“Well well! Look who’s come to play!” I felt something slam into me. I felt a painful tightening sensation around my neck as if something were chocking me. I was being suspended above the ground by something unknown! I tried to fight it, but was not able to; I couldn't help but hang there, helpless..
“What are you…doing to me?” A ghostly figured come into view. It was black, and there was a hand around my neck. The black one… it was just like a ghost; an evil black ghost with that face…
“HELLO KITE! WELCOME HOME!” As it slammed me on the ground, I let out a big grunt as the sensation of pain was still there. “You may call me Black Ace, MY DEAR BROTHER!” My eyes grew heavy as I slowly passed out with the horrifying laugh.

[Faust kellhound]

watch out for those evil black ghost with a face, guy. they will take your princess with out a second thought